pulse: fixed dev note formatting
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title: pulse under latent semantic envelopes - development notes
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album: Shirakaba Express Service
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categories:
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- Songwriting notes
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wiki:
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publish: true
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siblings:
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- path: pulse.md
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tag: PULSE_SONG
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# pulse under latent semantic envelopes: personal dev notes
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The remaining bits of how I came to all this
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The remaining bits of how I came to all this. For the actual song page, see PULSE_SONG.
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## Planning area
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Literally, there can be long, essay-like, paragraphs (not too many) with structurally interconneting statements and sentences. But flairs of fragmented fractures of language (almost alliteration) is also appreciated and desired.
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**Structural proposal**
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1. "Surface." - the breach, the fever-dream opener
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2. Instrumental - let the image settle
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3. Essay/documentary - the explanatory core, almost clinical, "semi-boring scientific" (this is where the concept gets stated plainly before the rest of the song complicates it)
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4. Instrumental - going into the poemic verses
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5. Poem-ic verses - emotional density, maybe climax, maybe not
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6. P-U-L-S-E 5-liners - trademark closer, acrostic constraint
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7. Instrumental outro
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**Structural proposal**
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1. "Surface." - the breach, the fever-dream opener
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2. Instrumental - let the image settle
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3. Essay/documentary - the explanatory core, almost clinical, "semi-boring scientific" (this is where the concept gets stated plainly before the rest of the song complicates it)
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4. Instrumental - going into the poemic verses
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5. Poem-ic verses - emotional density, maybe climax, maybe not
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6. P-U-L-S-E 5-liners - trademark closer, acrostic constraint
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7. Instrumental outro
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## Construction zone
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The first locked in draft version of the song. Things get developed even after this version.
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The first locked in draft version of the song. Things got developed even after this version.
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*and yes, I did use a C++ code block to write my lyrics.*
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```cpp
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// Opener
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