diff --git a/ses/pulse_dev.md b/ses/pulse_dev.md index ba49a7e..b1dd5b8 100644 --- a/ses/pulse_dev.md +++ b/ses/pulse_dev.md @@ -1,15 +1,17 @@ --- title: pulse under latent semantic envelopes - development notes -album: Shirakaba Express Service categories: - Songwriting notes wiki: publish: true + siblings: + - path: pulse.md + tag: PULSE_SONG --- # pulse under latent semantic envelopes: personal dev notes -The remaining bits of how I came to all this +The remaining bits of how I came to all this. For the actual song page, see PULSE_SONG. ## Planning area @@ -31,20 +33,21 @@ Submarine, underwater, subsonic and supersonic pings as well as passive hydroaco Literally, there can be long, essay-like, paragraphs (not too many) with structurally interconneting statements and sentences. But flairs of fragmented fractures of language (almost alliteration) is also appreciated and desired. -**Structural proposal** -1. "Surface." - the breach, the fever-dream opener -2. Instrumental - let the image settle -3. Essay/documentary - the explanatory core, almost clinical, "semi-boring scientific" (this is where the concept gets stated plainly before the rest of the song complicates it) -4. Instrumental - going into the poemic verses -5. Poem-ic verses - emotional density, maybe climax, maybe not -6. P-U-L-S-E 5-liners - trademark closer, acrostic constraint -7. Instrumental outro +**Structural proposal** +1. "Surface." - the breach, the fever-dream opener +2. Instrumental - let the image settle +3. Essay/documentary - the explanatory core, almost clinical, "semi-boring scientific" (this is where the concept gets stated plainly before the rest of the song complicates it) +4. Instrumental - going into the poemic verses +5. Poem-ic verses - emotional density, maybe climax, maybe not +6. P-U-L-S-E 5-liners - trademark closer, acrostic constraint +7. Instrumental outro ## Construction zone -The first locked in draft version of the song. Things get developed even after this version. +The first locked in draft version of the song. Things got developed even after this version. +*and yes, I did use a C++ code block to write my lyrics.* ```cpp // Opener