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@@ -13,17 +13,35 @@ The previous one is technically 'Yuuparo' but close enough for me to tag this on
 
 A song about how life goes on under perceived turmoil thousands of metres away. 
 
-## Lyrics
+## Lyrics (working)
 
 ```
-There were scenes I've come to known but never seen or heard.  
-Coal mines roar low day and night. air compressors, motors, conveyor belts, water pumps, self-propelled tunnel shields, drum cutters, lifts; boilers, generators, locomotives, trucks, and people of the mine.  
-Snow over the ever so slightly dwarfed mountain slopes, matrices of lights of alternating patterns every fortnight or so reflecting shift changes; mixtures of snow, steam, smoke in the air, smell of much burning.  
-People in the mines, people for the mines, people around the mines, people from the mines; people working, people fighting, people dying.  
+// Mostly, just list objects. But objects with an observer and that is how I get in.
 
-// Lines that shouldn't make it to the final text but of the right spirit  
-History is an easy thing to learn and remember but nigh impossible to live in. At the same time it is a thing imopossible to not live in.  
-My town is sentenced death and revived so many times by history and so many contactless observation endpoints from miles and miles away. I am an exile but I live on with the town.
+
+Things I have heard; things I have read; things I have seen; things I have been.
+
+// Coal
+Coal in the mountain. Mine entrance, burnt down once and twice. Names of good hope and names of misfortune. 
+
+Drum cutters, oxygen packs, boring pits turned water closets. Air compression, oil lubrication, self-propelled pillar shields. 
+
+// The power plant
+
+
+
+// Roads
+Road extending eastwards through the mountains. Road redirected above the submerged communities. Road tunnelling west in place of the zigzag railway and the legendary amusement park. Road up north with a million hairpins and deer unseen now closed for prolonged repairs. Road passing by along the active 
+
+// Houses (residential)
+
+// Melons and (long) yams or in a sense agriculture
+
+// The shrine
+
+// Public service buildings, disused or new
+
+// ...
 
 ```