From 8ac49634d77192ad12a77c8fbcd5b7be6bafa56d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mikkeli Matlock <matlockib@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 14 May 2026 23:26:22 +0900
Subject: [PATCH] pulse: much progress, almost fixed first passthru

---
 wip/pulse.md | 15 +++++++++------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/wip/pulse.md b/wip/pulse.md
index 18c180c..7787083 100644
--- a/wip/pulse.md
+++ b/wip/pulse.md
@@ -78,11 +78,14 @@ Curtain shut before the Fresnel bights
 Plasma buildup swells your rover's thighs
 
 // ending verse(s) before the painfully long instrumental outro
+// P:
 particular pressure plagues across a landlocked island
-// placeholder U-L-A lines, change at will
-unravelled is the illusionary ziptie independency
-lamenting functions weave a zigzag pattern
-stabilising fins break the rogue waves
-// Locked final reverse acrostic
-essential sentiments left unconditionally permanent
+// U: 
+ultraviolet utilitarian paints every third crag bland
+// L:
+ludicrous lies lament the lawful liberty
+// S:
+siren sounds soaked in the sauna of substantiality
+// E-S-L-U-P:
+essential sentiments leave unbidden perpetual
 ```