diff --git a/wip/pulse.md b/wip/pulse.md
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@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ Or the next one could never fire otherwise
 
 // ending verse(s) before the painfully long instrumental outro
 partial coldfront over a landlocked island
-unravels the illusionary legend of ziptie independency
+unravelled is the illusionary ziptie independency
 lamenting functions weave a zigzag pattern
 stabilising fins break the rogue waves
 essential sentiments left unconditionally permanent